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lightkeeper
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0 posted 2007-11-02 06:30 AM




Be still my beating heart,

for the time is now.

We have travelled this world

as one my friend,

you gave me a sense of purpose

knowing the path i chose

i was guided,

every step of the way.

Beating strong and true,

you shone like the sun,

but the time is here,

for our paths to part,

but upon this last breath,

my soul will always know

the warmth of your love.


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-11-02 07:13 AM


Fabulous...James
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2007-11-02 07:53 AM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-11-02 08:48 AM


Say it isn't so! Are you saying what I think you're saying?

Your Love Road has been a beautiful one to behold. I have enjoyed reading of your heart "travels" together.

Love, like all energy, may change form, but it  never truly dies.

Beautiful expression of loving sentiments.

Loving hug,
Linda

lightkeeper
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4 posted 2007-11-02 09:03 AM


Hey linda.... no Fear ... all is well with me and my heart and to whom and where my heart guides me.... i just love the thought that at the very end of my days upon this land .... my soul will  always know the warmth of that.... My Heart

Love Bernie x      

My heart always guides me true

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5 posted 2007-11-02 03:51 PM


What a perfect object your heart is too? It glisters better than any diamond, it beats with a passion to fill the universe, it sizzles with desire after dark...and it is a special place to be when close to?

Thank you... a beautiful poem sweetheart....

Love Phil.xxxxxxxxx

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-11-02 06:54 PM


Okay, now I am relieved! ~ and Phil's loving and enthusiastic response brought a big smile to my face. You two love bugs belong together! ~ So mote it be! lol

Love to you both!

Linda

miscellanea
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7 posted 2007-11-02 09:15 PM


Your writing is lovely, so sensitive!  Much enjoyed


miscellanea

Honeybunch
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8 posted 2007-11-03 01:22 AM


Yes, the soul will always know.  Enjoyed your words, lightkeeper!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-11-03 06:56 AM


how beautiful is this!  thank you for sharing   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2008-01-09 06:47 PM


A lovely piece Bea,

Protect that heart of yours,
give it to someone special,
you deserve the best.

Thanks for your friendship!

~Milly

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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11 posted 2008-01-09 06:56 PM


nice read
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