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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2007-11-01 06:20 PM



Wood Be, Forest Sighs

Devotion disarticulates its limbs
Filling gaps of silence with concentration
Tender vibration surrounds to the marrow hope
November promises atonement

Fondly does the wind welcome home
Wing beat forms horizons of inked commotion
Told and traded on the breeze as if slow motion
Trees bow, let low their leaves

An evening tease renders supplicant
The sun to set, adoration won’t forget
Free form in each verse of reasons lacking
Voices find the pitch of wayward tracking

Once again, the geese have gone

Just as time itself, seems counted on
Acknowledgement of vow and secret kept
Ever autumn bound to fate may not forget
Devotion disarticulates its limbs

Copyright Kkh 11/1/07

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2007-11-01 06:50 PM


quote:
Fondly does the wind welcome home
Wing beat forms horizons of inked commotion
Told and traded on the breeze as if slow motion
Trees bow, let low their leaves



This vision is diffusing such an intense vibration of beauty.

As always you are wonderfully inspired and inspiring.

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2007-11-02 01:43 PM


GR8 write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-02 04:06 PM


Nice...James
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2007-11-04 03:58 PM


Once again, the geese have gone

yes they've gone
makes me sad
but o in such grandeur they leave
honking their horns
'look at us, look at us' they say
and into the great white way
they fade......

Magnus
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5 posted 2007-11-04 06:20 PM


They are here....amongst us, so elegant
with their finest dinner attire.   Thanx
for the portrait Kiddo,  always a pleasurable
read

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-11-04 07:28 PM


i always enjoy to read your poetry !

ARCTIC WIND

Shadow_Singer
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7 posted 2007-11-05 12:28 PM


Enjoyed this

vandana
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8 posted 2007-11-05 11:18 AM


good read
Brian23
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9 posted 2007-11-05 12:19 PM


Such a beautiful poem. Enjoyed a lot
marcel
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az, usa
10 posted 2007-11-06 12:46 PM


Wild flowers and colorful leaves should lace this poem as it sits in a golden frame.  Beautifully written.
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