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Fading Stars (song)
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Fading Stars (song) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 The stars have all but faded, I'm feeling a little jaded, I don't think I can do this, anymore, The mess that you have created, now splatters across the floor, I remain a stain on your sleeve, the place you should carry your heart, You told me you were going to leave, the target now has hit its mark, now this seems all complicated, maybe a bit overated, No one can stand between the earth, between the earth and the moon, like snow falling in June, I don't think I can do this... anymore... You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Love this write! For me... your best! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sad but written with a lot of feeling, Always remember the sun will shine again for you And I wish you luck. Lindsay |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
wow JL I don't know what o say...thank you! ~ARH Sending Warm Hugs~  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James~nice of you to stop by and reply! ~WARM HUGS~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
LindsayP~WElcome and thanks so much for your reply and wishes! ~WARM HUGS You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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