I sit in silence at the shore

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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-11-01 01:19 PM

*

I sit in silence at the shore
viewing in my mind's eye,
for the thousandth time,
the sweetness of your smile.

It dances upon the waves' crests
and within the soft breeze
caressing the water's surface
and mine, in ravishing designs
it brings me your very breath.

I fill my lungs with the essence of you
and life's enchantments carry me
into magical thinking of only you
upon unknown heights of delight.

I plunge with my heart and soul
into the beckoning light of your eyes,
yearning to lose myself in you
cuddling you and kissing you all over,
until every single atom of your being
will recognize me and love me for who I am.

Later, the stars will gossip over
the audacity of those lovers
performing their wild love dance
upon the silky moonlit waters,
in free audience for the whole of Universe.

And in the end a cosmic smile will expand
over the hushed waters of passion,
and still entwined, safely washed ashore,
we shall drift into each other once more,
tenderly rocking our souls into bliss,

for we are flowers blooming in the night,
carrying the fragrance of dawn’s kiss.
*

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

1 posted 2007-11-01 01:29 PM

Beautiful enchanting visions expressed

Hope

Honeybunch
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South Africa

2 posted 2007-11-01 02:49 PM

Oh, Margherita, so very romantic and beautiful. Stunning picture too. Am going back for another read - I've already done the sighing!

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2007-11-01 02:57 PM

I love it

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-11-01 03:20 PM

Wonderful...James

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-11-01 05:26 PM

ms mar, beautiful place in thought you make here

vandana

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6 posted 2007-11-01 06:12 PM

nice read

miscellanea
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OH

7 posted 2007-11-01 06:30 PM

Outstanding write! The ending was awesome, as was the entire poem. Soooo pretty, Margherita!!!

misce

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

8 posted 2007-11-01 06:32 PM

for we are flowers blooming in the night,
carrying the fragrance of dawn’s kiss...

lovely, Margherita

M

Midnitesun

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Gaia

9 posted 2007-11-01 06:38 PM

"And in the end a cosmic smile will expand
over the hushed waters of passion"
Whooohooo! What a lovely thought!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

10 posted 2007-11-01 06:55 PM

Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the kind replies.

The picture shows MY lake, the lake of Zurich. A place where I am totally attuned to All there is. There I realize all my dreams and there I perceive the breath of Universe.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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Australia, Victoria

11 posted 2007-11-01 08:31 PM

Great write Margherita, brilliant photo and

lovely words, loved it

Lindsay

Khe Iem
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since 2007-10-14

Posts 25

12 posted 2007-11-01 11:26 PM

for we are flowers blooming in the night,
carrying the fragrance of dawn's kiss.

It is a beautiful image. Khe Iem

lyricpoet
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