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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-11-01 09:08 AM





Kiss me as if we were dying,
your last breath upon me,
kiss my tears as I am crying,
one kiss for all eternity,

allow our lips to form a heart,
shape my soul with your kiss,
cutting out every shape and part,
not one spot do you miss,

Pour all of your love upon me,
passionately I drown,
having tasted loves serenity,
peacefully I lay down,

Sweet loves rest abounds me,
as I enter where angels trod,
love has touched me deeply,
I await for you my love...

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-11-01 10:11 AM


Well done.  
Write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Orchid
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2 posted 2007-11-02 09:06 AM


Great piece of work! Beautifully written.


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-11-02 11:08 AM


Thank you..thank you interloper...

Warm Hugs~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-11-02 11:09 AM


Thank you Orchid...and welcome to PIP!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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