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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-11-01 06:50 AM


it was on the other side of mystery
where day dreams were solo candy
given as gifts to blind men
without strings for returning
when the healing finally begins

I brought you sand castle poems
unassembled as flip flop cowboys
bare foot boots you seemed to love
to hear on your window place ladder
when the dogs were watching peacocks

and the woman of your skin
was wearing her midnight oils
like saliva diamonds on glitter
under the indigo of a quicksand sky,
where you said your mister waits

without hooks in his moon
or rules in his directionary
perhaps only some sand on occasion
and maybe even a pearl or two
or something with caramel flavors

to wake you on each other's mornings


___________

daark


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with you
1 posted 2007-11-01 09:39 AM


"I brought you sand castle poems
unassembled as flip flop cowboys
bare foot boots you seemed to love
to hear on your window place ladder
when the dogs were watching peacocks

and the woman of your skin
was wearing her midnight oils"


love this D...
so cool

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2007-11-01 10:24 AM


Barefoot boots don't work well in this neck o' the woods  
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-11-01 01:09 PM


it was on the other side of mystery
where day dreams were solo candy
given as gifts to blind men
without strings for returning
when the healing finally begins


Your poetic creativity is fascinating, dear D.

Poems become events.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-11-01 05:27 PM


ms suesea, thank you babe

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interloper..perhaps they are an indoor item?  thanks my friend

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ms mar, thank you for your eyes here ms

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2007-11-01 06:42 PM


under the indigo of a quicksand sky,
where you said your mister waits

without hooks in his moon
or rules in his directionary
perhaps only some sand on occasion
and maybe even a pearl or two
or something with caramel flavors

to wake you on each other's mornings


...well just when I  think you can't come up with another "you-thought-beautiful"... there it is!

hugs you
M

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2007-11-02 06:22 AM


ms MMs, thank you dear lady
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-11-04 06:44 AM


mmmmm.... lovely Mr Daark!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-11-04 07:33 AM


thank you ms R & B
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9 posted 2007-11-05 03:30 PM


you do make me smile.........
The Lady
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The Southwest
10 posted 2007-11-05 03:46 PM




"without hooks in his moon
or rules in his directionary"

rules mar the directionary
stranger darlin'
any direction works
exceptionally
...with some people

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2007-11-06 06:19 AM


ms gs, thanks donna

____________

ladyone,thanks lady friend

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