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Autumn Lake
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Autumn Lake |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Autumn Lake The grand Autumn sunset dances with astounding clouds in a deep-October sky reflecting in this shimmer-ripple lake, (limpid mirror of finest dreams) rimmed by flaming-crimson maples, while three tiny turtles line a floating log to watch, the pair-bond ducks painting aquatic arabesques of perfect freedom! ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 yes! Those ducks are my buddies! Sun-bathing turtles watching those duck 'arabesques' completes this Autumn scene beautifully! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I am always amazed at how many ways you can describe beauty and nature. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, your beautiful "Autumn Lake" instantly brought back my own lake, and though I have just been there, I wish I could sit by it again right now and watch such scenery as you so masterfully describe ... (no turtles in my own lake though, but many swans and ducks yes). Sigh. Love, Margherita  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful and more beautiful. perfume for life Tomtoo |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Simply beautiful...well done!! Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007 |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
beau·ti·ful 1. having beauty; having qualities that give great pleasure or satisfaction to see, hear, think about, etc.; delighting the senses or mind 2. excellent of its kind 3. wonderful; very pleasing or satisfying 4. the concept of beauty 5. (used with a plural verb) beautiful things collectively (usually prec. by the): the good and the beautiful 6. the ideal of beauty (usually prec. by the): to strive to attain the beautiful This poem is all of the above, and a fine work of art. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I also amazed at how many ways you can describe beauty and nature!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I would like to thank you again for all your comments, they honor me!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a glorious sunset whilst tiny turtles and dancing ducks enjoy the view from "Autumn Lake"!  Giving you a warm, autumnal hug, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I just had to revisit those turtles and 'pair-ducks'! |
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