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WindWalker
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0 posted 2007-10-31 09:17 PM


A pale sun filters hesitant
through a thin layer of November cloud:
It’s morning - I’m walking down town;
I meet a man I’ve known a while.

He carries a host of serious health problems
the combination could certainly
cut his uncertain hold on life any day.

The knowledge does not embitter him;
he does not lash out nor seek to blame
someone, or something
for his many and painful problems.

He still enjoys life it would seem,
and he does not judge anyone
for how they live their share of that life.

He still likes watching the day come alive
as the sun appears over rocky peaks
on a clear morning.

What keeps this man from giving up?
From saying enough is enough?
Is it because he sees his world
from a different perspective than most?
And I ask myself: what can I learn
from this man's passion for life?

Perhaps something as obvious, simple
and difficult as this:
problems are never solved
by running away from them –
they must be faced each day head on
and each day conquered
or allowed to go free so I too may be free.

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-10-31 10:01 PM


Whatever lesson we may take from this, it seems this man has embraced the carpe diem concept at its most basic level...that each moment of life is a treasure to cherish and live fully.    
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-11-01 08:04 AM


Nice writing...I believe that acceptance of our position is important...or should I say acceptance of the truth...James
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-11-01 10:29 AM


adjust, adapt, overcome.

Well done

ladylisa
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4 posted 2007-11-01 11:08 AM


A thank you to you for this poem.  I look at life the way this man does. I have some serious medical issues and refuse to give in to the bitterness, pitty or judgement.  I wake each day with a Thank You just to wake again and to be able to experience the joy of breathing.  Wonderful poem. lisa
Margherita
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5 posted 2007-11-01 02:50 PM


He still likes watching the day come alive
as the sun appears over rocky peaks
on a clear morning.


Enjoyed reading your ponderings.

While this man concentrates on the beauty of a dawn or on his relationships, he expresses gratitude for being. He knows probably that he is not alone in coping with all the challenges, even the tough ones, that life  puts on his path. He relaxes into the beauty of the thought of being cared for and he "collaborates" to solve the problems with a spirit of gratitude.

Thank you for the thought provoking and significant write.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2007-11-01 06:15 PM


as always...a thoughtful, thought-provoking, and most interesting 'write' from a superior author!

serious applause!

miscellanea
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7 posted 2007-11-01 06:28 PM


I love the way you approach your message.  Your poetry is so real, said in a relaxed, calm manner.  Saving this.

misce'

latearrival
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8 posted 2007-11-02 02:38 AM


In complete agreeement with your thoughts. It is the only way to live a life with meaning."late"
lyricpoet
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9 posted 2007-11-02 06:20 AM


Excellent write

Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-11-02 10:28 AM


WW, God bless that man ~ and God bless you!

This divine write resonates with my soul, my mind ~ and my heart. His gratitude, spirit and positive attitude are reminders for us all.

In spite of all that he has to endure, he truly is living in a state of grace.


EA


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