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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-10-30 06:34 AM



what are those distant sounds of waters
that are as varicose winters
in early pressing of the dunes

acknowledging my humanity as sinews
writhing the girth of this demon
carved by worshipers of the bones

when gifting the forbidden with yearning
did her glass brittle the edges of tears
falling from her hands like splinter ends

onto the doubting laughter of my floor
but how I wonder of her eyes when dreaming
if it is her delight to see this dancing

of the L word's fool in his crown and bells
____________

daark


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aziza
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1 posted 2007-10-30 10:42 AM


I love waking up to the lilting words
of the hurdy gurdy.

Love this, I do.

A

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-10-30 04:49 PM


Every write of yours, dear D., represents for me an English lesson, a Poetry lesson and after having absorbed these two ... then comes the Overall Beauty lesson! You see, my time here is time well spent.

You are unique.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-10-30 05:30 PM


ms az, thanks lady friend for the wake up eyes

__________

ms mar, thank you for wearing my words here

rwood
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4 posted 2007-10-31 02:22 PM


"of the L word's fool in his crown and bells"

He doesn't know who he's messing with.

May I ask, your Darkness, would that be lust or love? or something else for me to fear.

big lovins,
reg


Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-10-31 05:22 PM


ms wood...dare we speak what dwells beyond
lust and love..
beyond the distant shelves
where the books become whithered?

thanks lady friend

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-11-05 03:18 PM




"writhing the girth of this demon"

demon is a lovely word
stranger darlin'


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-11-09 04:46 AM


hmmm... me thinks you would do the "L" word quite nicely Mr Daark...   whatever the "L" word is that is!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-11-09 06:12 AM


ladyone, thank you ms

____________

ms R&B thank you for "liking" this one

vandana
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9 posted 2007-11-09 11:04 AM


good read
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2007-11-09 04:53 PM


ms vandana, thank you lady!!
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