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Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

0 posted 2007-10-30 03:18 AM

It was the middle of the night
When I turned on the light,
Tears running down my face like rain;
For my dreams had woke me then
It was exactly Three AM
When I heard the echoes of your name.

The city is silent, love is all spent
Paying the dues to sing out the blues;
Singing the blues.

Where are you staying these days
Why did you go so far away,
I can’t help but missing your touch;
When the cold comes creeping
I just start to weeping
Baby I miss you so much.

The city is silent, love is all spent
Paying the dues to sing out the blues;
Singing the blues.

This rain won’t stop flowing
But there’s a drought still growing,
This water it’s just wasted from me;
You’ve taken love from my heart
It was my weakest part
From you I’ll never be free.

The city is silent, love is all spent
Paying the dues to sing out the blues;
Singing the blues.

Tomorrow will be coming soon
And it will be another sad tune,
It could have been any song you’d choose;
But without you staying here
I’ve just a deaf ear
And I’ll just cry the blues.

The city is silent, love is all spent
Paying the dues to sing out the blues;
Singing the blues.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-10-30 05:45 AM

Nice writing...James

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-10-30 08:07 AM

There is always mercy in the early hours of the morning. Quietly, enrapt outpouring to the night. Tucked in dreamspeak, the tears turn to morning rain.

Understood the feelings here.
Well done.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-10-30 10:54 AM

ShadowSinger~
This is very touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2007-10-30 11:59 AM

Touching write , I can relate , I am always awake in the middle of the night , this sounds much like me

Hope

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

5 posted 2007-10-30 12:04 PM

Thanks, the blue needs to be felt, even if the melody is too quiet to hear, you made this song.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-10-30 01:47 PM

Oh, that lonely ache in the middle of the night ~ missing the other half of your soul. Too many of us have been there.

You brought it all back to me with this 'real' write.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2007-11-03 03:50 AM

sunny days are ahead my friend~

I have a shoulder, if you ever need one...

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2007-11-04 01:26 AM

I hear your song loud and clear Shadow

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

9 posted 2007-11-04 04:02 AM

Thanks to all, nice to have an ear

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