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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-10-30 01:11 AM


He Feeds Me

He feeds me words one syllable at a time
and tantalizes me with the touch of vowels on my lips
Strong fingers reading Braille on my body
as I taste the whispers he murmurs

I hear the visions in his mind and learn his desires

Oh, to hear his thoughts as he savors each part of me,
touching  - he teases, he does.  His eyes laugh as mine close
and whimpers turn to moans and moans turn to pleading
and pleading turns to demands as my hands pull him to me

Lips to skin
Body to body

He prays upon each exposed parts of my woman flesh
worshipping soft curves and hollows, stealing the chill
of cold winter days that meld into dark nights

He feeds me words one syllable at a time
and tantalizes me with the touch of vowels on my lips.


Alison



[This message has been edited by aziza (10-30-2007 08:47 AM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-10-30 05:28 AM


Wonderful flow of thoughts...James
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-10-30 06:18 AM


ms az, you embrace a thesaurus lover..you are lovely here ms, enjoyed it
Honeybunch
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3 posted 2007-10-30 01:57 PM


Loved this, Alison!  May you always remain hungry!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-10-30 02:06 PM


"He feeds me words one syllable at a time
and tantalizes me with the touch of vowels on my lips."

~ So that's how it's done! I must keep that in mind for myself to do as well! I tend to be too verbose! lol

Thank you for sharing that delectable love meal! I, for one, am always hungry!


Linda

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5 posted 2007-10-30 05:31 PM


quote:
He prays upon each exposed parts of my woman flesh
worshipping soft curves and hollows, stealing the chill
of cold winter days that meld into dark nights




Absolute delight!

Love,
Margherita

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2007-10-30 05:48 PM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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