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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2007-10-29 04:40 PM


Petition the moon to
“stay a little longer
and spell the sun”
whose wicked rays
rouse dreams
from deepest
slumber

Beg the stars
“slow to rise
find a lazy orbit”
long enough
till round me swirl
visions
of sweet
desire



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Magnus
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1 posted 2007-10-29 05:13 PM


Robert, I think the poem carries an excellent
idea,  reads nicely and conveys images that
are pleasant to see in our mind's eye....

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2007-10-29 08:24 PM


Wonderful write
miscellanea
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3 posted 2007-10-29 08:27 PM


Nice!  Yes, I'll sign that petition.
Margherita
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4 posted 2007-10-30 06:57 PM


So very lovely!

Love,
margherita

illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22
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5 posted 2007-10-30 08:49 PM


Oh Robert, this made my heart smile and I coud almost feel the velvety touch of your words. Truly beautiful!

Illusive x

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