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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-10-29 08:59 AM



    

Your sound
** *


Every single word
you utter
plays a different chord
and key
deep inside me
where I keep
the whole musical scale
to sing my cosmic song,
where connections
are orchestrated
worldwide
and impulses radiated
far beyond
the known itineraries.
You generate the tune
that ties me
to your soul,
you beat
the drum
that makes me ache
for the touch of you.
You produce
the sound
that urges my feet
to move
and my heart
to dance along.
You set the scene
where we fly
over parquets
with no memories
dusted with our
new breath
born upon this moment
that holds
everything…
that holds
you and me.

© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-10-29 09:07 AM


His sound played in harmony with your sound, makes for a glorious symphonic sound of love.

I adore the cosmic beauty of your poetry. I am always smiling throughout my reading ~ and experiencing ~ of every poem that I read.

Love to you, Marvelous Margherita!

Angelo Terrestre


Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2007-10-29 02:09 PM


"You generate the tune
that ties me
to your soul,
you beat
the drum
that makes me ache
for the touch of you."

Only a very special person can do that.  Yes, the sound is definitely love.  A truly romantic and loving write, Margherita.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-10-29 02:24 PM


Silky...classical music opens the door to my emotions...James
Magnus
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4 posted 2007-10-29 03:57 PM


Goodness....Muy Bueno....
vandana
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5 posted 2007-10-29 05:25 PM


nice read
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2007-10-29 05:38 PM


a most pleasant 'write'!

I am particularly fond of:

"deep inside...
where I keep
the whole musical scale
to sing my cosmic song,
(with) connections
are orchestrated
worldwide"

[that certainly sounds like a fine expression
  of the cosmic perspective ("Universalist"
  Paradigm!)]

The ending is especially good as well!

Applause!

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2007-10-30 12:05 PM



Lovely poem Margherita, delightfully

written. much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
8 posted 2007-10-30 06:20 AM


ms mar, you capture the core of an ocean here
of a tree, of the sky, enjoyed it ms

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2007-11-13 03:48 PM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the kind replies!
Love,
Margherita

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