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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-10-28 04:22 PM



and on those dragon tail afternoons
mahjonging pretzel cloud del frisco's
across the wrist band of folded hands

you are there in your gypsy gown
offering me the end of threads
and telling me to hurry my tugging

lest you give them to the wind
and kite your skin over my eyes
glimpsing my songs with forbidden

there is no room in mosey town
for both my heart and my mind
when we high noon our daily bread

wandering the waters of your smile


_____________

daark

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aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-10-28 05:37 PM


... and this does make me smile, D.  It's most lovely.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-10-28 06:39 PM


there is no room in mosey town
for both my heart and my mind
when we high noon our daily bread

wandering the waters of your smile

simply delightful Mr Daark!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-10-29 04:05 AM


Good morning Mr. D! The loss of a gypsy gown to the winds is a good thing to happen, believe me ...
even more so if it brings along a poem with such great appeal!
Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2007-10-29 05:17 AM


ms az, thank you for warming your skin by this fire ms

____________

ms r & b, thank you for looking up from down under


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ms mar, thank you for wearing this gauze on your thoughts ms

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