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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Another sleepless winter night... I'm counting seconds, all alone. Obscure, just like the candle's light, Are dreams of what is still unknown. And, waiting for the dawn coming, I hear your voice through misty thoughts. My heart is torn; it's bleeding - loving, And left unsaid is just one word. The pearls of lonely, genuine tears Are sadness only you can see. I need, like air to breathe, to hear You still believe... believe in me. You're close and far; it's sweet and bitter, My strength is you - your sorrow's mine. My poison turns to something sweeter With every glance of dear eyes. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Another sleepless winter night... I'm counting seconds, all alone. Obscure, just like the candle's light, Are dreams of what is still unknown. oh I do like this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Thank you! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is very Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very personal and powerfully emotive 'write!' I am particularly fond of: "You're close and far; it's sweet and bitter, My strength is you - your sorrow's mine. My poison turns to something sweeter With every glance of dear eyes." applause!!... P.S.: and, as I believe I mentioned once before, I REALLY love you choice of 'P.I.P.-land' UserName (ID)...very effectively 'poetic!' |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Thanks for all the warm words! |
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