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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2007-10-27 12:23 PM


                     

JACK O'LANTERN
by Linda L. Dowd

I carved a pumpkin and named it Jack,
then painted him, a moustache black.
Upon his head, I placed a crown,
and carved a smile ~ up-side down.


His eyes were sad and lacking light,
so in to him, I put candle bright.
He came alive and boomed to me,
“I’m Jack O’Lantern! You set me free!”

His face transformed to grinning beast.
He said, on me ~ he’d like to feast!
I was terrified from head to toe,
as the jack-o-lantern began to grow.


I screamed and tried to run away,
but my two feet were clumps of clay.
Flames leaped out and singed my clothes.
The horrid smell burnt my nose.

Its flaming mouth was gaping wide.
I feared that I would soon be fried.
I shuddered when it growled at me,
then ran and hid behind oak tree.


With clap of thunder, came the rain.
and Jack O’Lantern writhed in pain.
All remains of the fiery beast,
were left for bats, on which to feast.

I carved a pumpkin and named it Jack,
then painted him, a moustache black.
Upon his head, I placed a crown,
and carved a smile ~ up-side down.


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[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-28-2007 10:39 PM).]

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LindsayP
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1 posted 2007-10-27 02:15 AM



Great write Linda,

One thing for sure there's nothing wrong with your imagination, great rhyming. Take care. warm hugs to you dear girl.

Lindsay

Xillus_Xavier
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2 posted 2007-10-27 02:31 AM


With Halloween almost here this is a great way to get into the pumpkin carving spirit.
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-10-27 07:47 AM


Wow, dear Linda, I am impressed. You did a fantastic job here.

I nearly felt like running away too ...

Happy Halloween!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

latearrival
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4 posted 2007-10-27 11:20 AM


Good job. Scary picture and scary poem.. WOoooo"late"
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-10-27 11:54 AM


Lindsay ~

This was fun to write! I got into the Halloween 'spirit' as I wrote it! lol

Thank you for your kind response.

Loves 'n Booze! ~ Ooops! I mean "BOOs!!! lol

Linda

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-10-27 11:56 AM


X_X ~

Thank you! ~ and I adored the clever and comical clerihews that you posted.

Happy Halloweenie hug,

EA

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-10-27 12:01 PM


Margherita ~

'Tis the season to be wary,
of monsters bad ~ and very scary!
They'll eat you if you turn your back,
'Cause you would make a tasty snack!

Happy Halloweenie hugs of love,

Linda

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-10-27 12:02 PM


Late ~

Then it's mission accomplished!

BOO to you! ~ and a great big halloweenie hug!

Linda

Ericc
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9 posted 2007-10-27 05:01 PM


Excellent write!

Eric

JL
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10 posted 2007-10-27 07:29 PM


"With clap of thunder, came the rain.
and Jack O’Lantern writhed in pain.
All remains of the fiery beast,
were left for bats, on which to feast."

Always a good side to every story!
I say good riddance to Jack O’Lantern, and
hello bat food…

Nice write Linda!!

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2007-10-27 08:08 PM


Linda... this was so much fun to read!! Happy Halloween my friend!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2007-10-28 08:53 AM


Eric!!! Hi, there! It's been awhile! Thanks for stopping by ~ and for leaving such an "excellent" reply!

Giving you a warm hug 'n a half,

Linda

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2007-10-28 08:55 AM


JL ~

Right on, Tex Man! lol

~ May you never be a meal for the batty ones!

Happy Halloweenie hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2007-10-28 08:58 AM


RDB ~

A happy Halloweenie hello to you, Roniece!
Will you be dishing out candies ~ or be out there trick-or-treating?!? lol

I am so pleased that you enjoyed my tall tale!


Linda


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15 posted 2007-10-28 11:55 AM


EarthyOne~
For an ANGEL ... you sure are full of -ment~

A delightful read ... the grandie girlies will enjoy it too~

We painted 'punkins' last week~

Trick or treat ?
It's ALWAYS A TREAT to read you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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16 posted 2007-10-28 01:40 PM


I doubt there is a child in the country
who would not totally enjoy this poem...

Perhaps this is my second childhood.

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2007-10-28 06:53 PM


Marge ~

I am delighted that you will be showing this post to Delaney and Landry!

Give them each a big, happy halloweenie hug and a Hershey's chocolate kiss from their "Queen Angel".



EA/EO/QA/

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2007-10-28 07:03 PM


Magnus ~

Well, m'dear fellow poet, I am enjoying my second childhood as well! ~ Actually, I don't think the first one ever ended!

Thank you for the very nice comment!

Happy Halloweenie Huggarroooos!

Linda Lou

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19 posted 2007-10-28 11:16 PM


Wow Linda! This is fantastic!
Earth Angel
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20 posted 2007-10-29 09:28 AM


Smartest Chick ~

Hi, Sweet Sue! Trick or treat! Nah, I'd never trick you! You're sweet and deserve a treat!

Happy Halloweenie hugs,
Linda

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21 posted 2007-10-29 02:33 PM


Oh yes, it is very close...James
Artic Wind
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22 posted 2007-10-30 06:18 PM


ea, don't angels have magic powers to beat evil? lol

Next time paint an angle face on your pumpkin and call her Jill O'Lantern. lol

Good halloween poem.

ARCTIC WIND

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23 posted 2007-10-30 06:30 PM


Arctic Wind ~

What a cute reply! ~ and a great suggestion you have there! Thank you!

Happy Halloweenie Huggarrooonies!

EA

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2007-10-30 06:32 PM


James ~

Oooops! I almost missed your reply! Thanks for reading and responding!

HH hugs
Linda

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25 posted 2007-10-30 09:53 PM


Very Cute!  Happy Halloween, Linda!  I really like the combination of artwork and your poem.

Poor little Pumpkin!  I'm sure he didn't mean to scare anyone...  Darn  bats--I was hoping for a piece of that pumpkin pie...

Thanks for nice little treat!  

  

iliana
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26 posted 2007-10-30 11:35 PM


Oh my, Linda....our Angel can always be relied upon for a seasonable treat!  I'd like to carve up that ole Jack and make some pumpkin pie.....yum!  Enjoyed muchly.......KBHBLY.....lily jo
Earth Angel
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27 posted 2007-10-31 07:18 AM


Misce ~

Oh, you should have seen him!
He grew to 10 feet high!
He surely would have made,
~ One gigantic pumpkin pie!

Great to hear from you!

Have a H H !


Linda

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2007-10-31 07:21 AM


iliana ~ So there you are! ~ You busy little lily jo!

I am baking a pumpkin pie today ~ but not from ole Jack's remains! Would you like me to send you a piece via air angel express!

I'll send a piece to misce, as well!

KBHBLY 2

Linda

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29 posted 2007-10-31 06:17 PM


His face transformed to grinning beast.
He said, on me ~ he’d like to feast!
I was terrified from head to toe,
as the jack-o-lantern began to grow.

Halloween spirit is your true poetic self

r&r

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2007-10-31 08:35 PM


rosey_red ~

"Halloween spirit is your true poetic self"

~ Well, not really! lol I just play around a bit with the dark stuff! ~ 'Tis the season! tehehe


EA

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