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comoloco7
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0 posted 2007-10-26 07:36 AM



Crazy About You

I’m still crazy about you as I see you walk out the door
I had you in my arms for a second, like I did so many times before
You walk away and disappear; it all seems so familiar to me
I held you close but couldn’t kiss you, it was not meant to be.
Now you’re with him wishing it was I the one to kiss your lips
Instead I’m alone, staring at the wall knowing that I missed
Yet another chance to have you by my side as he holds you in his arms
And does the things that I been dreaming of doing right from the start
Sill you spur me on while pushing me away and slowly loose my mind
You don’t know what you want and he is all you have but you cant be that blind
Not to see that you and I share a common want
To be with that someone but let the spirit fly
Detached of all emotions but everyday you dig
Deeper and deeper still when you stay with him
I know you so much better, treat you so much better
But I guess you’re drawn to pain, and when the dust settles
I may not be around, to help you when you’re down
To set your feelings straight, to help pain dissipate
And you will long for me the way I do tonight
The way I miss your touch as my pen writes
Its pains down on this paper, you will feel so much safer
If you return to me and shed the clothes that bind your beauty
And come to me and lay beside me…
But you’re with him, and I am here, a tear of pain never appears
And I’m still crazy about you, you walked out my door
The way you’ve done so many times before
I felt your lips caress my face
It didn’t stop you from walking away.

In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died.

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2007-10-26 08:38 AM


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2007-10-26 06:56 PM


quote:
I know you so much better, treat you so much better
But I guess you’re drawn to pain, and when the dust settles
I may not be around, to help you when you’re down
To set your feelings straight, to help pain dissipate
And you will long for me the way I do tonight



This is something that happens indeed, when we love someone, but there is no contemporaneous response.

I treat you so much better this depends on interpretation!

Good job.

Love,
Margherita

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