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Open Poetry #41

Tearful Song

Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

0 posted 2007-10-25 04:32 PM

Holding back the tears,
On seeing you,
Yes it has been too long
Since last we heard the song,
Of wind in trees on colored leaves,
Of a trickling brook where we stop to look,
Of a tender touch that means so very much,
And now you’re going
Till when we neither have way of knowing
Holding back the tears,
On seeing you,
Leave.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-10-25 04:51 PM

Nice writing...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-10-25 07:26 PM

"Of wind in trees on colored leaves,
Of a trickling brook where we stop to look,
Of a tender touch that means so very much,"

~ Everything is so much sweeter and more beautiful when we are with the one we love.

You penned your sadness at your parting, very poetically.