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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-10-25 02:17 PM


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In a narrow valley
By a shallow stream
Under autumn leaves

Four squirrels
One black
And three gray

So easy to see
However quiet
With their bushy tails

And I think to myself
With a smile
As they go their way

Boy Pop
Would've got his limit
In half an hour


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24
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1 posted 2007-10-25 04:32 PM


Been there done that, makes me wonder, what happen to that old 22?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-10-26 06:24 AM


John, I like this...  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

WindWalker
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3 posted 2007-11-09 08:46 PM


This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!
Huan Yi
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4 posted 2007-11-09 09:04 PM


WW,


Thank you

If he could
Pop would thank you
as well . . .

And thanks to everyone else . . .

John

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