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Match
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since 2002-07-01
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0 posted 2007-10-25 02:44 AM



The ice drips along the frosty reckless road,
little tears fall creating puddles.
"Goodbye cruel world",
the winter whispered to the spring,
and with one last flutter
he furiously tried to save his fevering frozen land.
With the flip of the sun he ended his fight
and winter took flight,
committing his first suicide.

-Ash-

© Copyright 2007 Ashley Schell - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-10-25 02:52 AM


I suppose you could say that with spring, winter had met his "Match"!

We certainly know what winter is all about up here, north of the 49th! Eh?!? lol


EA


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-10-25 03:37 AM


Love the imagery in your Winter's kiss. Well done.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2007-10-26 06:29 AM


Ashley.. this is lovely!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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