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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-10-24 04:40 PM


Oh Yes Oh Yes

She sends
waves of love
across an
ocean so deep,
genuinely
so sensually
my sweetheart
is sweet.

Do I love her?
Oh yes oh yes.
It is her heart
saturated with love
that I yearn
to caress.

JamesLee
25October
2007


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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-10-24 04:43 PM


jamesmichael-

oh yes, oh yes

this was a very sweet poem

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-10-24 04:43 PM


Ah, dear James, to caress a heart is quite an art!

Lovely, yes!

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-10-25 12:53 PM



oh James
you are so romantic
and she is so lucky


LindsayP
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4 posted 2007-10-25 01:53 AM



A very touching poem James.

well done.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-10-25 02:40 AM


James, that was a "sweetheart" of a write! ~ "Oh Yes Oh Yes", indeedy!


Linda


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-10-25 04:07 AM


James... oh yes, oh yes!  very nice poem my friend .. RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-10-25 07:24 AM


Thank you Artic Wind, Margherita, Lady, Lindsay, Earth Angel and Roniece for the wonderful responses...James
Honeybunch
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8 posted 2007-10-25 12:16 PM


One can't help but admire a man who so willingly and openly expresses his love.  Not many of them around in my experience.  Keep it up, James.
Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2007-10-25 12:22 PM



James, this is so sweet, and almost innocent..

I liked it.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JL
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Texas, USA
10 posted 2007-10-25 02:13 PM


Nice James!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

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