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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2007-10-24 02:02 PM


Cold...Snowing every day.
1954 in "the project"
No work, no pay.
Food scarce.
Beans and soup,
No extras.
Religious group
To the rescue.
Gather children together
For Sunday school
In cold, empty room.
Religious books,
Broken crayons,
Milk and cookies
At the end.
I'm nine.
Religion is fine.
Milk and cookies
Are better.
Endless talk,
Hard to pretend.
Can't wait.
Hunger, thirst.
It's after noon.
Over soon?
Waiting is the worst.
Different view
Of religion
If milk and cookies
Were first?

              Ida

© Copyright 2007 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2007-10-24 02:07 PM


fine, powerfully emotive 'write'!

There is often a cosmic dichotomy between 'organized religion'
and (true) Christianity... they are often far from synonymous...

I am particularly fond of:

Religion is fine.
Milk and cookies
Are better....

Waiting is the worst.
Different view
Of religion
If milk and cookies
Were first."

serious applause!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-10-24 02:12 PM


Either way, before or after the cookies, religion was just not priority.

This was very vivid and I enjoyed it.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2007-10-24 02:13 PM


Hi Bruce.
Thank You, I am not big on the "religions of man" but I believe deeply in the divine Spirit. Sometimes I am amazed at how well I remember my thoughts as a child.
                                 Ida


Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2007-10-24 02:15 PM


Thank you Margharita. You are right.
                           Ida

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