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illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22
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0 posted 2007-10-23 11:52 PM




Lullaby.

Sing me to sleep with words of kind
Let dreams so pure embrace my mind,
Take me to where the angels breathe,
Encompassed in security.
Adorn my world with thoughts so pure,
Where oceans vast embrace silk shores,
Let Mother Nature cradle me,
As sleeping lovers hearts do beat.
Surround my mind with pearly skies,
Please sing me once more; Lullaby.


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-10-24 03:06 AM


This is enchanting, dear illusiveangel!

A prayer song bringing peace and serenity.

My compliments and welcome to PIp.

Love,
Margherita

illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22
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2 posted 2007-10-24 06:20 PM


Hi Margherita.

Thank you so much for your feedback of my work...we can often doubt our own words most. Oh and it is wonderful to have a place in which I can share my feelings with like-minded people. Thanks again.

Illusive x

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-10-28 04:06 AM


Wonderful...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-10-28 05:53 AM


beautiful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-10-28 09:08 AM


Oh, if I could sing you a lullaby as lovely as this one that you have penned ~ I would.

Love & Lullaby Dreams,

EA

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2007-10-28 09:21 AM


beautiful just beautiful
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