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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

0 posted 2007-10-23 09:43 PM

Moon Fall-Sun Rise

The sky faded
Into a dark twilight
The lake sparkled
In shiny moon light

Stars woke up
Dancing around the moon
Bright in the sky
The sun will come soon

The moon light
Beamed through the sky
As the sun awakes
I say my good bye

The sky awoke
In a sunny bright sight
The lake now sparkled
In sunny bright light

ARCTIC WIND

[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (10-24-2007 04:25 PM).]

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

1 posted 2007-10-23 11:57 PM

Hi Arctic,

Oh I loved this! it really made me smile and was so catchy and upbeat...the sun shined back from your words!

Illusive.xxx

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2007-10-24 02:06 AM

lovely protrait of words you have painted!

~ARh

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-10-24 03:09 AM

I feel like performing some kind of fairie dance in the moon- and sunlight, while reading your lovely words.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-10-24 04:05 PM

illusiveAngel-

thank you!

that very nice of you
may the sun shine

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-10-24 04:06 PM

arh-

thank you so much arh
i love to write about the the moon and the sun!
beauty from the moon

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-10-24 04:07 PM

marghertia-

thank you, your are so lovely !

thank you, thank you, thank you SOOOOO MUCH!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-10-24 04:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-10-24 04:33 PM

jamesMichael-

Thank you,!

ARCTIC WIND

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

9 posted 2007-10-24 05:41 PM

.

Kind of reminds me of Peacock Pie

Good

John

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2007-10-24 05:59 PM

Very melodical and soft writing here. Absolutely beautiful graphic to go with it!

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

11 posted 2007-10-25 07:49 AM

Graphic and words are lovely

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2007-10-25 08:41 AM

ArticWind~

Write the moon and you've got me~
This is just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2007-10-25 03:35 PM

Huan yi-

Well, well well

what a surprise!
thank you, i am glad you enjoyed, and may i ask, what is the story your talking about, or poem or book or
movie what is it?

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

14 posted 2007-10-25 03:36 PM

gentil spirit

thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2007-10-25 03:37 PM

shawdow singer-

thank you

and welcome to piptalk

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

16 posted 2007-10-25 03:37 PM

marge tindal-

you love moons huh!

well enjoy as much as you want

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

17 posted 2007-10-26 03:00 PM

My Dear Arctic Wind, this wonder-full post is one of lunar and solar magic and brings with it a sense of tranquility. Another winner!

Love to you, AW!

EA

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

18 posted 2007-10-26 03:05 PM

EA

thank you so much

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

19 posted 2007-10-27 10:00 PM

A delightful post Arctic Wind, you paint a

wonderful picture in words, well done.

Lindsay

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

20 posted 2007-10-27 10:35 PM

.

http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/3753

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Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

21 posted 2007-10-28 12:18 PM

This is really so soft... so wonderful...

Keep it up and I hope I read more soon

Tears of Sanity~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

22 posted 2007-10-28 11:18 AM

lindsayP

thank you,

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

23 posted 2007-10-28 11:18 AM

HuanYi

thank you again, and yes i know what it is

thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

24 posted 2007-10-28 11:19 AM

tears-

thank you for the other response too, on my other poem

and thank you now lol

ARCTIC WIND

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