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Saying Goodbye
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Saying Goodbye |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. No one knows You were here Even I In their company On hearing your name Inside my head Have begun to respond Who? All things of course Have an end The seasons’ change Are often more defined By what is then left behind The leaves fall Through autumn air Soon the years That followed you Will cover all . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A very thought provoking piece of writing. Extremely well done. I enjoy reading you. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent, John Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very, very beautiful!!! Tomtoo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' is supremely excellent... [particularly the ending]... a 'banquet for thought! [In my opinion, that's several REALLY 'important' writes in a row, John!!] very serious and long-sustained applause!! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all One of the reasons we practice with five finger exercises . . . Thanks again John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a very beautiful poem . I enjoyed it. Ida |
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