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Kalle
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since 2007-10-15
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Finland

0 posted 2007-10-23 11:42 AM


A Little over 10 Pm

I`m doing pull-ups at the old elementary.

Great bars, I never passed mine.

The feeling of pulling up your weight

Is marvellous, exceeded only by Pushing yourself from the Ground.

In both cases a sort of Physical ascension.

It is always at times like these I think of

Murakami`s Protagonists

They lead such mundane lives

Full of Delight and Mystery.

© Copyright 2007 Kalle Kaunisto - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
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1 posted 2007-10-23 01:37 PM


Kalle...I have been reading you a lot and I am fasinated by your style.

Please, do continue.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Kalle
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since 2007-10-15
Posts 89
Finland
2 posted 2007-10-23 01:46 PM


Do I have a "Style"

I guess it is like A great POet Arto MElleri said

"By copying from others you create paschtisches, by copying yourself you create style."



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2007-10-23 05:45 PM


Nice...James
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-10-23 06:52 PM


A little pushing and pulling does wonders for increasing one's endurance ~ and on many levels.

Intriguing write.

EA



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