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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-10-23 01:03 AM

Sunflowers, Wolf Birds, and Ways We Touch

Dizzying the sunshine
Ascends as bound, hesitant only to trust the sky is blue
All I feel for you calls to the wind; bend briskly yellow dancers on the drive
Familiar melody could blow through me as days contrive
But for sudden shifts of emotional wisdom
Subside the breeze

What dalliance do I evoke in these?
Sensations soak, so well aware now gentle wishes court
As Ravens delve hospitably as sport, such shadow shakers on the prowl
The fore crisp colors glow in gray, portend dismay and howl
Such tenderness, expressed outstretched the talons intervention
Close by your heart, my best intention soars

And limitless such gentleness restores
The water of your words implores my crave to taste
Wainscot fences pleat the senses, here beside your sable graze
Not too proud to mouth out loud my deepest thanks and praise
But understand discerning man, it is the slight of hand that speaks
And mine elucidates the very soul and all that my love truly seeks

Copyright Kkh 10/20/07

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-10-23 09:32 AM

"Wainscot fences pleat the senses, here beside your sable graze
Not too proud to mouth out loud my deepest thanks and praise
But understand discerning man, it is the slight of hand that speaks
And mine elucidates the very soul and all that my love truly seeks"

It is a pleasure to stop by Passions and find this treasure you have left here Kathy!

You have grown and blossomed in your writing since first I read you.

Wishing you the best,
Sincerely, Nancy

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-10-23 02:14 PM

quote:
Familiar melody could blow through me as days contrive
But for sudden shifts of emotional wisdom
Subside the breeze

There are always poetic heights in your creations, dear TD.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-10-23 05:44 PM

Nice...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-10-23 06:36 PM

Hi, TD. It was difficult for me to pick out my favourite line, however, I think this one held a special meaning for me:

"The water of your words implores my crave to taste"

You write so beautifully.

EA

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2007-10-23 07:19 PM

This is so beautiful!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-10-23 09:22 PM

beautiful!

love the poem!

i liked the idea, the writting and everything about it

ARCTIC WIND

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-10-25 01:00 AM

"What dalliance do I evoke in these?"

perfection TD

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

8 posted 2007-10-25 07:43 AM

You paint with words as if a melody

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2007-10-25 08:44 AM

Kathleen~

*sigh*

'All I feel for you calls to the wind'

*sigh*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2007-10-25 02:10 PM

"Familiar melody could blow through me as days contrive
But for sudden shifts of emotional wisdom
Subside the breeze"

What a beautiful poem!
Nice read, TD.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

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