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Beautiful Blue Forest Of Night
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Beautiful Blue Forest Of Night |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Silence covers the night, as the forest closes her eyes, deeply it lays in slumbers sleep, Barn owls fly by night, hunting for their prey, hooting in the distance, A soft, gentle breeze, blows the wheat and barley, strong pine stands still. Lavender blue hue of shade, misty shadows cover all, something magical glows, This mountain mist, has many legends, stories to be told, What awaits in the mist? is it beauty? is it life or death? As you peer deeply, look closely at your soul, the mist will show you, The reflection of who you are, who you will become, and what you have left behind. Decisions can still, be made, while there is still time... You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
"This mountain mist, has many legends, stories to be told, What awaits in the mist? is it beauty? is it life or death?" that was the best part for me... I love legends and I live to make stories... I keep wondering about secrets of life, and search for all kinds of beauty... That's why I like this part the most.. You have a good poem here and I am glad I had the chance to read and understand the beauty within it  L.W. Tears of Sanity~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really enjoyed this...especially the last three lines...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, that is quite a hint there in your closing lines. Lovely. Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enchanting ARCTIC WIND |
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Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
that`s a very Finnish landscape Where did you get it? And the poem is not bad at all, perhaps too much loaded with all the destiny-talk and purpose I find my mind strip of all human concepts, looking at such a beautiful view... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
T.O.S.~Thank you, yes I too like legends and stories, would like to read some of yours! ~ARH |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James~ glad to entertain you! Thank you! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Miss M~ lol, yes it was a big hint! Thank You ARH |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Artic Wind~ I am curious about the name? would love to know more? are you doing exploration in the artic? hopefully, a chilly name but warm heart! ~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Kalle~I found the picture or painting on Photobucket.com that is where I get most of my photos from. They don't tell the author most of the time! I am from Virginia and the pic looks like my back woods....the place I go for peace and serenity and to find... "perhaps too much loaded with all the destiny-talk and purpose", that you so negatively mentioned.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
To the top...James |
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