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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-10-22 01:09 AM



            

She reaches out to you,
long nights of misty haze,
across oceans vast and deep,

Her heart calls your name,
loneliness is her pain,
roaming alone, again and again,

Searching for her true love,
the one that tied her heart,
into knots of braided twine,

Listen closely to her whipers,
in the darkest of night,
hear her soft, enchanted voice,

hear the longing, the ache of love,
it will pierce the hardest of hearts,
she still calls for you.

When the moon is in full glow,
she sadly sits underneath,
saved tears that she cried,

Dying heart, withering inside,
she remains faithful to the promise,
the promise of your love,

Just close your soft gentle eyes,
think of her, she is thinking of you,
a matched moment, frozen in time.

She loves you,
she will always love,
with her words,

of poetry and rhyme....


LISTEN
Listen
listen....

Her love beckons you still....


            


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-10-22 09:47 AM


Beautiful, captivating write!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-10-23 03:24 PM


arh-

what a beautiful poem that you have created here, i really enjoyed

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22
Posts 72
Liverpool, UK
3 posted 2007-10-23 03:29 PM


Os so beautiful, so sad and so very cleverly written. I was especially taken with the 'listen' at the end and felt that, that helped pefect this whole piece. Excellent!

Illusive.x

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-10-23 03:34 PM


Thank you M~    

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2007-10-23 03:35 PM


Artic Wind~


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2007-10-23 03:39 PM


illusiveangel~

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

vandana
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7 posted 2007-10-23 06:00 PM


good read
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