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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2007-10-21 07:15 PM

* * *

Voice of ice

* * *

My lonely shivers
of coldness
reverberate
on snow capped mountains
along with
my voice of ice
stammering your name

the crystal sound
of my call
skips over oceans
and skies
aiming
at the center
of your soul.

In the hush of dusk
the first stars
flicker through
the nakedness
of dozing trees.
And here we are,
arms and branches
yearning
for a touch
of heaven…

Do you listen, dear?
Will you play
heaven tonight?
Will you be
the blanket of love
and wrap yourself
around my
frozen skin?

Please, do it
and let the
melting process
begin.
Bring your cup of bliss
so that we may sip
drops of honey
from each other’s lips.

Come, my master
of love and light,
be my heaven tonight!

* * *

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-10-21 07:19 PM

oh, margherita how lovely i am happy to hear from you

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-10-21 07:21 PM

Margherita, you have such a marvellous imagination and I am thankful that you have the poetic talent to express it to, and share it with, your avid readers, of whom I am most assuredly, one!

"Will you play
heaven tonight?"

~ What man wouldn't?!?

Love to you, Dear Poetess!
Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2007-10-21 09:21 PM

Very nice, Margherita
Ida

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-10-22 02:57 AM

"the crystal sound
of my call
skips over oceans
and skies
aiming
at the center
of your soul."

I am sure your call finds its destination but it's just a pity we aren't all in touch with our souls. Lovely write, Margherita!

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

5 posted 2007-10-22 03:03 AM

Nice poem

Tears of Sanity~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2007-10-22 06:31 AM

ms mar' you make me thirsty with this cool refreshment, enjoyed it ms

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2007-10-22 06:54 AM

oh how lovely! enjoyed

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-10-22 08:28 AM

Nice...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-10-25 01:02 AM

ahhh... now this poem is exquisite...

"Do you listen, dear?
Will you play
heaven tonight?
Will you be
the blanket of love
and wrap yourself
around my
frozen skin?"

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

10 posted 2007-10-25 01:49 AM

Lovely words in a lovely poem Margherita

delightfully written, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2007-10-25 11:55 AM

Thank you all my dear Poet friends for passing by and commenting so lovingly.
Love,
Margherita

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