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Jazna Leaning There (repost)
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Jazna Leaning There (repost) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Jazna Leaning There The rain on the cabin windows drifts like rinse waves in a car wash. My fingers searching minor sevenths, my ardent gaze the portside rail, to see Jazna leaning there. The summer's marbled skies spread wide our trolling laughter buffed with spray, her listing form against the rail. I tune to open G where all blues and heartaches follow when. From sacred space her spirit falls, a surreal vision cosmos sent. Devolved from humid heavy mist her blue-eyed radiance beams in quandom pose leaning there. With sudden suck of breath to heart, my ebbing guitar descants play to searing pains of her demise. I cry out with odes and tears to see Jazna leaning there. This is about boat rides that were once enjoyed with a beautiful girl that suddenly passed away years ago..... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
nice read i really enjoyed this poem, i have already re-read it two times ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome,dear friend~ I so readily remember your beautiful poetry about Jazna~ You made her real to those of us who didn't know her in this life ... but through your loving thoughts, I came to know her well~ Good to see you dearest one~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Artic Wind and it's a pleasure to meet you! Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Why thank you Marge and it's good to hear from you again......Your plume is still rich! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for sharing Jazna with us. She lives on through your loving poetry. "The rain on the cabin windows drifts like rinse waves in a car wash." ~ Yes! ~ but I had never thought of it that way before! I appreciated your use of guitar notes to denote moods. It is so sad when a beautiful radiance like hers is gone ~ at least for this lifetime. Love & Eternal Light, Linda ~ May the music play on. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eric... thank you this was a beautiful read and you have some wonderful memories of your cherised and beautiful friend.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There is music in this and magic and romance. Thank you for penning it. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice memories you have...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
ethome...Great write. Enjoyed. Somehow without really knowing how I knew this was about boats and water before reading your explanation, but never knew the part about your dear friend Jazna. She must have been very special to you and I am sure you to her.Memories are forever...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Earth Angel (Linda) I have tried to put some music through the guitar to this emotion but it just isn't menat to be yet. I appreciate the kind words. Thanks RDB I'm happy you could read and enjoy the meaning of this piece. |
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