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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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it won't be all that long before my days are consumed and gone and it'll certainly be sooner than that for this song to be sung I've already seen the last merry-go-round you should know it came singing thorugh a dream like a tarnished taste I must not of cared ta remember but I had so hoped to find an elusive love that must have gotten some where misplaced a long the line but honestly I think it was lost to a time and can't be found or replaced in fact trying to recover it is just a useless scenario yet the love story lingers on so what ever happened to that love you do see it's what I really want to hold again and the only thing I can recall is that it disappeared like a mist in the dawn of a waking youth aroused some years later only to find it was truly gone never to be found I sighed I cried I lied for a while until I couldn't fake it any more and for the sake of a happily ever after I thought it best to let you know the most beautiful part about this scenario is it just happens to be imbedded permanently in my memory unfortunate sometimes but still a place nothing escapes * * * |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dale... this is beautifully expressed! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thanks so much for taking the time. Glad that you enjoyed. lucky Dale |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale........Dreams and things are here and gone, yet a poem is a dream-thing or a thing of dreams that once written, always is. It's really good to see you! Hug! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"yet the love story lingers on" ~ and you have shared it so beautifully. Warm, loving memories such as yours, can be bittersweet when revisited. Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug, EA  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nice to see you Marty. Thanks for the read. By the way I dropped you a line, left it in the "Discussion forum" I wouldn't mind getting a note from you, Maybe ya could tell me what's been going on. Stay Blessed, Dale |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Earth Angel Thanks so much. You seem to have more insight than most or you really are an angel. All My Best, Dale |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LUCKY !! Well, lucky ME .. to get to read another of your beautifully word-sculpted pieces~ It is, as always, so delicately done~ So ! How the heck are you and that lovely Rosemary doing ??? Miss you ... hey, did ya' know that I've had a book PUBLISHED ???? 'Out of the Whispering Winds' came out around the first of this year .... available online at www.amazon.com or at www.barnesandnoble.com Needless to say ... (but I will anyhow) ... I am SO proud of it ... a poetic legacy to honor my Native American Indian heritage~ Life is good and I keep busy~ *HUGLETS* to you both~ Lots of love~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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walter l. jones New Member
since 2007-10-26
Posts 4Wisconsin USA |
Voice and form blend well, my mind is caught in the share of thought and presentation, a gifted write, leaving image and sound, a poet from fanstory lead me to this, I am so glad he did, enjoyed.. Walt |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thanks Walt, Can't think of anybody over there accept for Martie Dale |
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