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Bang...Bang You're Dead
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Bang...Bang You're Dead |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Bang… Bang You’re Dead By Paul Wilson I was hiding behind the sofa waiting to ambush you Six shooter in hand I had a clear view Bang… Bang You’re Dead Running to and fro between house and yard I was the sheriff you shot the bank guard Bang…Bang You’re Dead You grabbed a hostage and ran out the bank My name was Wyatt yours was Frank Bang…Bang You’re Dead Together we went off to war nothing could keep us apart The years have passed so quickly we both won a Purple Heart Bang…Bang You’re Dead We both work the streets for a different cause I fight evil and the bad guys you sell drugs and steal cars Bang…Bang You’re Dead We met tonight in a dark alley It was you and I facing off in death valley Tomorrow will never be the same Tonight we played for real It wasn’t any childhood game Bang…Bang I’m Dead ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
Wow this is really, really good. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Great poem, Paul. I will look foward to your next one. Ida |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Xavier...Thanks, glad you liked this...Paul Marchmadness...I really appreciate your reply. I havn't been writting much lately, but with you looking forward to another from me maybe I will get inspired. Thanks...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
isn`t it to and fro? But aside of this MAN! This is really a poem I mean, this is how American POETry should be written it is ALL Here all of the america I know THE VIOLENCE; THE GUNS the catharctic Violence, death, shooting, the war, the blood the guts, the killing Amen, hail to american life force! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Paul.. I like this .. keep them coming!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Paul, a little change from your other writings. It is very good and raises thought. keep writing.You have been missed. "late" [This message has been edited by latearrival (10-20-2007 01:43 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love a good Read ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Paul, takes me back to my childhood days when I thought I was quick on the draw. Keep up the good work. Lindsay |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paul, I got a quick view of Cher and Mod Squad and CSI and the local news... but you held it quick and fast and even musically... Well done, for the topic... I'll be looking for lighter daze.  " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Thanks, I appreciate your reply...Paul Kalle...You were right about the "To" thing, I am always getting them mixed up. The games we play as children sometimes turns deadly. Thanks for the read & reply...Paul Roniece...I will try. My muse seems to be on vacation lately. Glad you enjoyed this...Paul late...Just trying to get myself moviated. Most of the time I write whatever my mood and heart tells me to write.Glad you liked this, thanks for the reply...Paul Artic Wind...Thanks, glad this caught your fancy...Paul Lindsay...So you were one of those fast draw kids to, like we all thought we were. Thanks for reading and replying...Paul Sunshine...Thank you for relating and I will try to keep it lighter, but I guess I'm a realist and always see the bad and ugly part of life...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Paul! It is so good to see you posting again. I find that there is a little gift for me in every poem of yours that I read. This one actually conjured up wonderful memories of playing cops 'n robbers with my brother. I had my own holsters and cap guns and I "always got my man!" lol I enjoy the versatility of your writing talent! Loving hug, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Earth Angel...So you were sort of a tomboy huh, playing shoot em up with your brother. LOL. I can remember those days like they were yesterday. Taking sheets and making a tent to sleep in and play cowboys and Indians in on rainy days. finding a big old cardboard box and making a fort or bad guy hideout. You don't know how good it makes me feel to have you say you get a little gift out of each of my poems you read. Thank you so very much for that...Paul Sue...Thank you for taking time to read and reply. I appreciate it very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-21-2007 07:38 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write Paul. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Paul, you did a great job with this one. Reality is not always easy to handle, you served it very well. Love, Margherita |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...Thanks my friend for the reply.Nice to hear from you..Paul Margherita...You are so right. Thanks so much for reading any your reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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