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too many miles.... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Life has lead me down a path I hadn’t planned… now too many miles separate what my soul wishes for and where my heart must yet be when all along what was dreamt of was you..…with me still...there is an absolute knowing that holds my heart resolute in will I loved you then, love you now, love you always oh and forever still… no path, no partner neither yours nor mine could alter this emotion so pure in design no, it’s not how I planned it still the dream in my heart remains the same and when the missing you ache is just too much I smile and softly I whisper your name… ~SEA~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So good to 'SEA' you posting again! The photo complements this poem, picture-perfect-ly! "Life has lead me down a path I hadn’t planned…" ~ Life is full of surprises! ~ some good and then there are those aren't so good! lol Lovely spill from your heart pen!  EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, you make me smile with this one..enjoyed you here |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ymmmm...exquisite like Audrey Hepburn...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing, Sue  M |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are so great, thank you for the replies and smiles |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sea , this sounds so much like me , I do the same Hope |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
how beautiful this is! exquisite! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
knowing this sweetie...Hugs. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
This could not have come at a better time. Thanks, Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueSEA~ There is always such soft beauty to the thoughts you share~ You know I love this one~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
How fortunate you are to be able to smile through the "missing you ache". Lovely poem, Sea! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
so nice to see you here in every drop my dear there is an ocean |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sea- i love this poem very graphic in a good Way lol ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You have always been one of my favorite poets. This is just beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 I know this, too... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue...Very tender write. Enjoyed much, glad to read you once again, it's been awhile...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
no path, no partner neither yours nor mine could alter this emotion so pure in design I love the soft surrender to fate perceivable in this melancholic write. Love, Margherita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantabulous! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
stunning photo and poem! It's good to read your poetry! miscellanea |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay Ya, Sue I know I'm late as usual. Just wanted to say your writing is everything it used to be and a lot more. dale |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
SEA Your poetry moves me as few do. This is lovely - poignant and beautiful. I smile inside and thank you for sharing yourself as you do. A |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I love it when you write ab0ut me susanofer! it does feel like along journey at times, traveling over the salt flats with no end in sight (because, really, is Salt Lake City a destination???) always love reading you.  (ps - it's "led" not "lead")  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
rofl of course it is...I can't edit it now...sheesh...thanks Kissy, you are the only one who told me that was spelled wrong Salt Lake City is a pass through my dear and thanks all for the reads and replies |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, you know what they say about the best laid plans I guess that's why I just live day to day and leave things up to a higher power wonderful work here Susan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best writes.... loved it... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sea' you have written a wonderful poem So poignent and romantic and a touch of sadness, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
beautiful, sadly written unrequited love...I believe there must be someone whispering your name as well! H, Robert |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
[i]no, it’s not how I planned it still the dream in my heart remains the same and when the missing you ache is just too much I smile and softly I whisper your name[i] Goodness have I missed your writing Beautiful, sad, but beautiful. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all sooooooooooooo much for the reads and the heart warming replies |
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