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moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
0 posted 2007-10-16 12:34 PM


“1984”

I dreamed
I was George Carlin
and it was 1984

I woke up
when the thought police
came knocking at my door

I knew I was
at the end of my rope

When I saw each one
had a bar of soap

The bubbles I blew
were a curious hue

Some were purple
some were blue

All seven words
were now hidden from view.
© Copyright 2007 Paul R Breen - All Rights Reserved
Kalle
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since 2007-10-15
Posts 89
Finland
1 posted 2007-10-16 12:43 PM

Thank you for introducing this guy Carlin, great stuff, never heard of him before...
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2007-10-16 01:01 PM

I know who George Carlin is, Moondogz and this is too funny.
                                   Ida
TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
3 posted 2007-10-16 01:58 PM

My son just saw him 2 nights ago. Said he was brilliant as always.   Nice write.
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