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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-10-16 08:23 AM

My Luscious Antoinette

So you think your plenty hot
striking a graceful silhouette.
Many men would agree with you
my luscious Antoinette.
In rustling silk and tapping shoes
you move most gracefully,
step into the coach my precious girl
to attend the masked ball with me.
I know you love to dance
as God knows I do too,
perhaps one of the many reasons
why I'm so devoted to you.
Tonite we will stay up late
and dance the night in sway,
tomorrow the Bastille falls
and thoughts of pleasure fade away.
The stars know of your fate
but shall not reveal it yet,
but me thinks that you won't like it
my luscious Marie Antoinette.

JamesLee
16October
2007
Read of Marie Antoinette,
the Necklace, the French Revolution,
and her death at the guillotine in
1793 at marie-antoinette.org

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-10-16 08:27 AM

just lovely James... let's leave for Paris tonight!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-10-16 11:55 AM

JamesMichael~
I like the ways in which you are poetically branching out ... good splash of ink~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2007-10-16 01:02 PM

Very nice!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2007-10-16 10:55 PM

One of your best James, I'm sure Antionette would have loved it too. great write.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-10-17 06:11 AM

Thank you Roniece, Marge, Smart Chick and Lindsay for the wonderful responses...James

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

6 posted 2007-10-17 05:30 PM

another super wonderful one.

enjoyed very much

Tomtoo

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2007-10-17 05:32 PM

Brava sir! Lovely

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2007-10-17 05:46 PM

good read

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