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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2007-10-16 06:51 AM


Some words about my lovely French friend who is sick of living in Paris... I would gladly swap with her! RDB


Marie Chantal...
Drops by to say 'bonjour'
She wears large round glasses
And tee shirts with slogans
That aren't quite true
Her face always carries a smile
She is loud and funny
She is soft and sad
She says she wants to leave Paris
She says she needs the mountains
To help her breathe
I think... she just needs some love
I think... her woman strength will see her thru

She is a french woman after all!


[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (10-16-2007 10:50 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-10-16 08:12 AM


Ah yes...at least one in Paris is itching to get out...and then there will be a little more room for all those desiring to get in...but perhaps all she needs is a week in the mountains, and she will miss her Paris...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-10-16 08:24 AM


thank you my sweet James for your comment... of course if she does leave then I will be the first on the list to take her place!! You of course can come visit any time!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2007-10-16 11:11 AM


I visualize a painting...a work of art come to life in your words.

Robert

Bobby Jordan
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4 posted 2007-10-16 11:27 AM


Roniece Dawson-Bruce,

This tells a true story well.  Every urban person has spells when they want to get away.  However, they get over it.

Bobby

The Lady
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5 posted 2007-10-16 01:10 PM




"She wears large round glasses
And tee shirts with slogans
That aren't quite true"

outstanding work
Roniece, my friend

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-10-16 02:30 PM


Roniece, I can picture Marie Chantal as though she were sitting across from ~ thanks to your descriptive writing. I can even see the longing in her face ~ mind you, her expressive eyes are hidden by those big round glasses! lol

I do so enjoy reading your memoirs of France and your friends.


Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-16-2007 11:35 PM).]

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2007-10-16 03:14 PM


Love  france

i am sure there is a enought room for both of you!
LOL

AU REVOIR!

ARCTIC WIND

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2007-10-16 08:21 PM


fine 'write'!

Applause!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-10-16 10:48 PM


thank you all for your lovely comments, I'm still suffering from PPD (post paris depression!)... it's nice that I can at least write about my friends there.. thank you again...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SouthernJustice
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10 posted 2007-12-17 04:06 PM


Kinda like a hip mona lisa i envision. Enjoyed. Southern Justice. PS I am a fan of the DaVinci Code
LindsayP
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11 posted 2007-12-17 09:34 PM



Oh Roniece Sydney is not a bad spot but if you really want a change why not come down to Melbourne, it's better than Paris and definately more friendly. Nice post Roniece
I enjoyed it.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2007-12-18 05:26 AM


thanks SJ you are very kind in your comments on my work ... RDB

Lindsay... I love Melbourne!!! though the weather can be a little bit strange! thanks so much for your comments... only 255 more sleeps for me until I see my beloved Paris again!! LOL   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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