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ladylisa
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0 posted 2007-10-15 10:04 AM



I was awakened by the simple sound of you moving,
getting ready for your day.

The soft breeze of the fan,
the comfort of our bed.

Sweet smell of your cologne,
drifted to me in my warm place of serenity.

I lay here with eyes closed,
just enjoying the sound of you moving by.

Although my eyes are closed,
a ray of the morning sun creeps in.

So warm and safe and full of love,
I will never leave my paradise.

A gentle hug and kiss to say goodbye,
and the smell of my man.

What a beautiful morning view,
to start my day.

© Copyright 2007 Lisa A Joost - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2007-10-15 10:44 AM


A very nice way to start a day.
Country
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2 posted 2007-10-15 12:08 PM


I love the imagery this creates.  It is simple and pure yet very easy to relate to.  I can feel the passion in your words.
vandana
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3 posted 2007-10-15 12:09 PM


good read
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-10-15 12:13 PM


What a grand and wonderful way to start any day. I know exactly what you mean!!! ~ you wrote of those kind of moments, purrr-fectly!  


Linda

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5 posted 2007-10-15 03:03 PM


You are one very lucky woman, ladylisa, to have such a morning view!  Thank you for sharing!  It's good to know that love does indeed exist.
Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-10-15 03:06 PM


Very beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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7 posted 2007-10-15 05:49 PM


quote:
I lay here with eyes closed,
just enjoying the sound of you moving by.

Although my eyes are closed,
a ray of the morning sun creeps in.




A truly beautiful, serene atmosphere!

Those moments are precious, silence filled with warmth.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-10-19 04:56 AM


Wonderful...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-10-19 06:20 AM


how lovely is this!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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