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Open Poetry #41

Going Downtown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-10-15 03:31 AM

Going Downtown

Going downtown
to see my baby,
I'll kiss her lips
until I drive
her crazy,
she'll cook
me up some
loving you stew,
my favorite deserts
on the menu too,
on the menu too,
on the menu too.

JamesLee
15October
2007

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-10-15 07:31 AM

enjoy your ride Downtown James... I like this!! RDB - hope you are well? x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-10-15 08:04 AM

Dear James, it seems that in your dream the dessert is priority ... I understand!
Lovely!

Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-10-15 09:24 AM

"loving you stew" ~ Oh, that is so darn cute!

Enjoy your meal ~ and your 'just desserts'.

Love the beat of your high-stepping! You sound so happy! ~ and I am happy for you!

Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-10-15 06:01 PM

Thank you Roniece, Margherita and Earth Angel for the wonderful responses...
This came out as a song or a ditty to me...James

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2007-10-15 07:04 PM

JamesMichael,

Hey, there you go. Go on downtown.

Bobby

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