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Open Poetry #41

(title unknown) need help with title

Lisann
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since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

0 posted 2007-10-14 11:31 PM

So many times I"ve longed to tell you,
HOw incredibly beautiful I think you are.
But, dare I take that risk?
To be cast downward?
And my heart scarred?

Would you even understand the attraction at all?
Or would this be just another emptiness?
A shattered hearts fall?

Oh,
But if you only knew
The beauty you portray
As a single smile escapes your lips........

Sending shivers down my spine,
All the way to my fingertips.

Do I dare take that risk?

NO, I dare not...........

For if I do,
And it NOT returned...........

I would soon be forgot.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-10-14 11:42 PM

Hmm, these possible titles came to my mind.

"Do I?"

"Dare I?"

"So Many Times"

"Taking A Risk"

"Risky Business"

~ As the saying goes, "Nothing ventured ~ nothing gained! I hope all works out well for you!

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

2 posted 2007-10-14 11:54 PM

My suggestion for your poem's title is Nebula....anyway nice work/ and I hope u find a title that fits 4 u.
moon.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-10-15 03:24 AM

The same title came to me as Earth Angel..."Dare I"...simple but effective, or perhaps you want a title that is effective but not so simple..."soon we will know"...hey, that could be a title too...James

veniceflorida
Junior Member

since 2007-10-03

Posts 22
Florida

4 posted 2007-10-15 08:04 AM

How about "Shall I take a chance"?

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2007-10-15 09:07 AM

I think "Taking A Risk" or "Risky Business" would be more suitable. I myself would choose "Risky Business". By the way, I sure understand your fear.

Lisann
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since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

6 posted 2007-10-15 11:50 AM

Thanks all for the replies and suggestions. I kinda like Risky Business.

Country
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since 2007-10-15

Posts 6

7 posted 2007-10-15 12:12 PM

Hi! I'm new here and don't pretend to be an expert but "An Unspoken Truth" comes to mind.

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

8 posted 2007-10-15 03:39 PM

hey that's kinda neat........

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