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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-10-13 10:53 AM






Over the edge of your mind


Watch me rise
over the edge
of your mind
like the morning sun
while sleep
slowly deserts you
carrying away
the secrets
of your dreams.

Receive me
within your thoughts
start this new day
with me
kissing you awake
stretch like a cat
and moan
your pleasure
to the gifts
of today.

Climb out
of slumber
feel the energy
of love
prickling you
say hello
and smile
let your heart
and your feet
steer you
to the mysterious place
where happiness
resides.

Hello!


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
1 posted 2007-10-13 11:33 AM


ms mar, the way you greet the sun is wonderful...enjoyed this much
TinaTrivett
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2 posted 2007-10-13 12:03 PM


Beautiful morning poem. Love it!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2007-10-13 03:37 PM




"stretch like a cat
and moan
your pleasure
to the gifts
of today."

yes Margherita
a wonderful wake up poem

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-10-13 04:18 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 posted 2007-10-13 04:23 PM


Hello Margherita,

This is a well constructed love poem.  It's very well done.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2007-10-15 01:28 AM


Love it, Margherita.
                   Ida

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-10-15 07:48 AM


beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2007-10-15 08:42 AM


"Hello" to you! May all your morns begin in such a glorious manner. Your poem not only made my lips smile, but did, as well.

Happy hugs,

Linda

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2007-10-15 09:21 AM


Beautiful! What a wonderful way to start a morning.
vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
10 posted 2007-10-15 12:11 PM


nice read
rugged_miss
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since 2007-10-27
Posts 26

11 posted 2007-10-31 06:28 PM


So peaceful I could actually feel myself drifting away in the calm .. Thanks for the warm welcome. You've enlightened me on coping strategies..
You're doing pretty well for one whose 3rd language is English


MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
12 posted 2007-10-31 06:41 PM


beautiful~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
13 posted 2007-10-31 07:03 PM


You are all so kind dear Poet friends. Thank you for your time.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
14 posted 2007-10-31 11:12 PM



Very romantic Margherita, you certainly

have a way with words. enjoyed.

Lindsay

nevermore93
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 73

15 posted 2007-11-01 01:01 AM


margharita are you also interloper? i was wondering for both of you posted on my poem war, and both of your member names are Rara Avis.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
16 posted 2007-11-01 03:14 AM


Thank you dear Lindsay!

Dear nevermore93 what a funny question! No, I am just Margherita, the name "Rara Avis" refers to the number of replies one has accumulated, if you check you will find many others who are given this same "qualifying" name, it is not the login name. Dear Interloper is a man, I am a woman. Anyway you made me smile! Thank you for that!

Love,
Margherita

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
17 posted 2007-11-01 10:25 AM


*Smiles*....Now that is a wakeup call!  *hugs*.....jo
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
18 posted 2007-11-01 10:26 AM


Howdy

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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