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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2007-10-13 05:53 AM





it was a century
just out of short pants
not yet long in the tooth
when time ticked
radios hummed
TV was a toy for the rich
when a president bought highways
strong enough
to land heavy bombers
and the government
hadn't yet tripped on a lie

it was a country
where half the roads still weren't paved
where license plates were essential
for driving in town
where too many still dreamed
of real luxury
like toilets that flushed
indoors
of electricity
that worked
every day

it was streets
with three dollar rooms
that were clean
two dollar women
fifty cent wine
twenty cent gas
and cigarettes
for five cents a pack

a place
where Bukowski could survive
on one candy bar a day
where getting drunk wasn't a choice
it was a religion
and the local bull
thought he was a liberal
for letting us choose
on which side of town
we were dropped off

it was a world
where growing old
meant getting by
where growing up
meant becoming invisible
like trash
in a garbage strike
in New York City
in the rain

©2007 by icebox


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© Copyright 2007 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-10-13 06:28 AM


  yes I remember these days... thanks for sharing... well done!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2007-10-13 10:07 AM


this takes me back to:
moments spent hanging out,
in City Lights bookstore
listening beat-poet readings;
strolling Haight-Ashbury
or downtown Chinatown alleys;
and affordable gas prices
for those who could afford
private wheels
to escape the city
when it felt too close....

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2007-10-13 11:13 AM


Very impressive flashback write, dear icebox.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2007-10-13 10:49 PM


Who will know the true flavor of those times when we are gone? You captured an era so well.
                                  Ida


The older we get,
The better we were.

I collect quotes, just thought I would share one.

Kalle
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since 2007-10-15
Posts 89
Finland
5 posted 2007-10-16 03:44 AM


I`ve never been to States but this paints the atmosphere of Kerouac, Bukowski and many other American writers whose names I`ve forgot or am ashamed of having read...
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2007-10-16 09:04 PM


excellent 'write' (as usual from this fine author!)

Where HAS America gone?!
[a rational participatory/representative
  "democracy" of 'Jeffersonian purity' has
  degenerated into a corporate "mediocracy"
  in which endlessly accelerating 'change'
  has been mistakenly equated with 'progress'
  ...all too often, it is only change (and)
  seldom for the better!)]

very serious, long-sustained applause!!

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