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A Man So Fine
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A Man So Fine |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona 
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A Man So Fine All truth is reflected Within your eyes Where all my fear And worry dies All I love And all I know Resides in you Since long ago Kisses like white Chardonnay So bittersweet in Such lovely ways A voice like song A pleasant tenor So gentle and soft There's nothing sweeter An embrace like the sea Strong and powerful A love so immense A heart so willful Passion like fire Determined and unstoppable When you have a will Failure is impossible Your wisdom seems ancient Like that of the wood When you speak I listen meekly Like a child would Despite your Unusual cavalier There's an heir of grace About you dear When you walk by The spirits hush The breeze grows still And the pretty mares blush my love, I am grateful That you are mine It's pleasing to have A man so fine warrior undefeated [This message has been edited by Warrior Bristo (10-13-2007 08:22 PM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am glad you have a man so fine, Warrior Bristo. I particularly liked your reference to the wisdom of the wood. - Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrennaNicole~ (what a LOVELY name) 'Your wisdom seems ancient Like that of the wood' Oh yes, this is a wonderful slice of poetic thought~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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