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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-10-10 08:12 PM


Woman That I Love

When I miss her
I desire to kiss her
to take her into my arms,
to partake of her charms
would be so much better
than to forget her,
and to lose the
joys of love.

How does it feel
to awaken in the morning
without my sweetheart
laying by my side.
It feels unreal,
as if love is losing
its zeal and has lost
its will to survive.

I shall never forget her
wanting to hold
and to kiss her,
preferring to hold
and to kiss her,
not wanting to
suffer while I miss her,
this woman that I love.

JamesLee
10October
2007





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Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-10-10 10:12 PM


I really enjoyed

i love reading your poems

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-10-11 04:23 PM


Dear James, with this soft, loving heart that beats in your chest there is no risk to lose your woman's love ...

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-10-11 04:48 PM


Thank you Artic and Margherita for the wonderful responses...
Margherita if she doesn't call me on a regular basis my thoughts miss her...James

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