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Summer entices |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Summer entices the lover in me to play on the fields of pleasure release but warns to avoid the hills and dales reserved for only the soul. There are days of rainy weather and a million things in the way of easy and carefree entry but the magnetized zone for soul pulls like into like regardless of timing and cost. Once entered it binds imagination to the merry-go-round of dreams and ties the freedom of mind to the task of climbing a jungle gym. It promises nought but loneliness in the turn, turn around, of merry-go-rounds that of necessity decrees the dreams secretive and invisible pastimes. The jungle gym twists a mind quite awry in its climb beyond limited wisdom but truth isn’t laid out on platters as a reward for the exhausted. Beware the zone marked for the soul but energy goes where energy plays! Helen / 10 October 2007 www.dreamtimepoetry.com |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
* Summer's beckoning eternal promise renewed the wheel of life turns * |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"The merry-go-round of dreams" I especially like this line. Nice write. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
icebox - I hope you're right. Thank you for your words. James and Ida - very many thanks for reading and for commenting. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wow! Impressive write, dear Helen! Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Margherita. Mind climbs but never quite understands that merry-go-round of dreams.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Beware the zone marked for the soul but energy goes where energy plays!" ~ Play on, perky poetess!  Loving hug, Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi, Linda. Yep - play time is good time! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"There are days of rainy weather and a million things in the way of easy and carefree entry but the magnetized zone for soul pulls like into like regardless of timing and cost." And your writing is alluring as well. Nice write Helen. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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