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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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My heart thumps drumming in my chest loudly, deafening crushing all rhyme and reason nothing makes sense this airs so dense I can not capture my breath It is so hard to breathe.. it sickens me til arms are flailing in mid-air sinking deeper then suddenly it is there soothing, calming quieting fears I hold it dear it is not to be yet it is because it was gifted to me perhaps it was or was not meant to be but it remains cherished. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done, Donna~~ I have felt that way before  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Perfectly rendered, dear Donna! We can't escape feelings ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"it is not to be yet it is because it was gifted to me" sweet moments indeed gentle Donna I know them well  |
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