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Abena Williams
Junior Member

since 2007-10-08

Posts 25
England

0 posted 2007-10-09 09:05 AM

I can see your warm smile on that handsome face,
I can feel your soft lips in that loving embrace,
I can sense your heart melt as our bodies draw near,
I can smell your scent as you whisper in my ear,
I want our feelings aired for all to see
And yet these memories are only for me.

AW

[This message has been edited by Abena Williams (10-09-2007 11:34 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-10-09 09:41 AM

Abena~
And lovely 'memories' they are~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2007-10-09 09:49 AM

Sometimes 'tis true...but others --- well, that's what makes days brighter...

jwesley

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-10-09 04:52 PM

Change the first line to say on her beautiful face, and it reminds me of a phone conversation I had with my honey yesterday...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-10-09 04:56 PM

nicely done~~

M

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

5 posted 2007-10-09 05:15 PM

warm and romantic as by fire light.

warrior undefeated

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-10-09 07:43 PM

very personal...finely romantic 'write'!

applause!!

Xillus_Xavier
Member

since 2007-10-05

Posts 72
Alabama

7 posted 2007-10-09 08:39 PM

This was nice.
A simple but very enjoyable poem

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2007-10-09 11:54 PM

Very romantic. I enjoyed reading.
Hugs,
Ethel

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2007-10-10 01:02 AM

Romantic indeed.
Ida

Hudson
New Member

since 2007-10-10

Posts 2

10 posted 2007-10-10 09:59 AM

What a beautiful poem, so romantic. Reminds me of a simular situation.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2007-10-10 01:54 PM

It's nice to eavesdrop to such delightful romantic talk!

Love,
Margherita ... and welcome to Pip!

Abena Williams
Junior Member

since 2007-10-08

Posts 25
England

12 posted 2007-10-10 06:14 PM

Hello to you all,

Once again, thank you for all your warm comments. It is very much appreciated.

Abena x

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