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Rendered Lonely
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Rendered Lonely |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I've been this way before rendered lonely in the wake. Thinking too deep, trapped in these words, disappointment hard to take. I've traveled this road before understanding, too much "between". Lost in the fog that paints one in blue, lately too much, this routine. I've lingered too long in this "will", waiting for just the right time. Though days pass me by in silence, I sigh hanging on to this wall I must climb. Understanding, a thing of the past, left alone to dwell on one's need. So I dance to the tune that plays in my head as a failure, sometimes, to concede. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Abena Williams Junior Member
since 2007-10-08
Posts 25England |
Hello, I have just stumbled across your poem and just wanted to say it was really heart-felt to the stage of an ache. I thought it flowed really well. Thank you for sharing it. Abena. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M, as you must realize by now, I always have to quote at least one memorable passage of any poem of yours that I read! "Though days pass me by in silence, I sigh hanging on to this wall I must climb." ~ Succinct, yet imparts so much... Loving hug, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Goooooooooooooooood POEM! love it ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know how you feel. |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
love the rhythm and heart. warrior undefeated |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
M, I have felt this same way and it hurts. You described the emotion very well. Thanks for sharing your poem. Hugs and God bless, Ethel |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
obviously, a heartfelt and emotive 'write'! I am particularly fond of: "Lost in the fog that paints one in blue" [that about 'sums up' my life!] Applause! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
AW...2ndhand stole my line ... I too, liked that one in particular....but it would be nothing without the rest which was wonderful. j. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great applause for your sensous poem Nakdthoughts, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I appreciate the time you take to respond. Thank you  M |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Missed this one. very good but sad. Life grows through stages. Next please..."late" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: In the moment you realize this, you are ready to move on, the peak is there, grasp it. I know of such melancholy and I can relate, but it's worth the effort to reach for the light, even in little steps. Well written and impactful. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"So I dance to the tune that plays in my head as a failure, sometimes, to concede." It's been said that how we think is how we are. May you think and know success! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
as long as you keep climbing, as long as the tune in your head is yours... you are alright. anything but concede. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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