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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-10-08 06:36 AM



there at our window of afternoons
I am your back skin warmth
you are my hand candy

tattoos mating under glass
we are bloody ink in love
with each other's black lines

and the painful pricking
we have waited for
is finally forgotten as rain

falling in the rivers we melded
from our secret waterfalls
when our deserts touched edges

and the wolves cried their lonely


______________

daark

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2007-10-08 08:46 PM



mmmmm...
stranger darlin'
this made me cry with the wolves
and you know how that sounds


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2007-10-08 11:13 PM


ladyone, thank you for the eyes..one of them back road shape shiftings here
Kahlil
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Posts 1881

3 posted 2007-10-09 09:48 AM


love the images in this
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-10-09 03:07 PM


You know D, when I read you I can not help but smile.  Enjoyed the howling here....
quatro
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since 2003-04-29
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Galveston, Texas
5 posted 2007-10-09 03:29 PM


Nice images and style....I like...

quatro

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2007-10-10 06:17 AM


ms kahlil, thanks babe

___________

ms gs, thank you lady friend for the eyes

______

friend q'..thank you much

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2007-10-10 12:33 PM


quote:
falling in the rivers we melded
from our secret waterfalls
when our deserts touched edges

and the wolves cried their lonely



Your poems vibrate intensely, D.

Love,
Margherita

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569

8 posted 2007-10-10 01:58 PM


I tried to highlight my favorite line and realized they are all equally wonderful. Kudos...well done.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2007-10-13 06:42 AM


mmm... very nice Mr Daark... very  nice.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2007-10-13 11:34 AM


ms mar, thank you so much for the eyes

_________

ms tina, thank you for the read

________

ms R & B, thank you lady friend for the touch

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