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Night at My Snoring Grandma's
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Night at My Snoring Grandma's |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Night at My Snoring Grandma’s I couldn't wait To go grandma’s house. But that night You couldn’t hear a mouse. Cozy and tired, I lay down in bed. but just before falling asleep She woke up the dead. I covered my ears Tight on my head, And then tried to sleep On the soft, cozy bed. Finally it stopped And I was falling to sleep Then she started again, It was as loud as a jeep! I quickly closed my eyes, Trying to fall into dream. But grandma’s snoring Was to the extreme. I then prayed to God, “Oh please let it stop”! But there was no end, I was in a workshop! I wanted to go home! I didn't know what to do i wish there was a such thing I would call the snoring cops on you I ran into her room With a massive horn. I blew it hard No stop to mourn. Grandma woke up With one big yawn. She looked outside And it was only Dawn. Grandma walked into my room And saw me awake. She widened her eyes and said “Did you eat my cupcakes?” ARCTIC WIND © 2007 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, and did you eat them? Grandma's cupcakes must be delicious so you can forgive her for the sleepless night! At least when Grandma snores it means she is alive, which is surely a blessing. A lovely humourous write. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- thank you the real meaning of the cupcakes is the saying "why are you up, because you probably had sugar" LOL but thanks and i have probably have eaten the cupcakes YUMMY ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Funny...hope it doesn't run in the family...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael- I dont even know if i snore "hopefully NOT!" lol ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Had quite a chuckle Arctic Wind as my wife is always chastising me for the same reason, but at least she knows I'm still in the land of the living. Nice write. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Linsday P thanks i like to add a little bit of humor in my poems throught time to time SHHH! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Cute poem, Arctic Wind. Was your Grandma amused? Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marchmadness- why thank you I am so GLAD you enjoyed this poem ARCTIC WIND |
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clawmute Junior Member
since 2007-10-01
Posts 24Arkansas, USA |
I wonder if cupcakes make good earplugs? Hmmmm... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Clawmute- LOl very funny maybe they do, cupcakes in my poem could be usedin many ways its up to the reader what they want of the what the grandmother said about the cupcakes ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
MUCHO ENJOYED!! I can relate!!! jwesley |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Arctic Wind, your poetry never ceases to put a smile on my face! This was adorable ~ just like you!  Loving hug and a haha, EA  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Jwesley thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea thank you so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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clawmute Junior Member
since 2007-10-01
Posts 24Arkansas, USA |
Speaking again of gran'mas, you inspired me or planted the seed, for a funny one about granny too. Thanks and a tip of clawmute's hat. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Clawmute WOW i am flattered, thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I bet grandmas cupcakes were good. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Smarth Chick- Oh they were sooo gooood !  ARCTIC WIND |
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